Categories: Authorprenuership

Journaling:Do you do it?

What’s your story?

Back in Dec of 2007 I started journaling  about my novel.  I typically started by talking about my day, maybe my feelings etc.  I found that this type of writing “primed the pump” as it were.  It seemed to release any creative blockage that were plaguing me.

Then as I moved from talking about my day, the thoughts about my book slowly rose to the forefront of my mind.  Questions about characters and their directions came up.  I wrote about the books I was reading the impact they were having on me.  The following is a bit from my first journal entry.

Dec 1, 2007

Journal thoughts

 Today I took the family to Ihop had a good time.  Today’s my sons birthday.  Plan on taking him to GameStop later, and possibly out shopping for a suit.

Was thinking about something I read yesterday while at the book store.  A book about writing novels talked about the review process, and mentioned that at some point put the manuscript down for 6 weeks before you review it again.  I find that there is impatience with me in doing that.  I want to work on it until it’s complete.  I guess ill have to see what happens as time goes on.

I’ve been thinking about an idea I read in the book.  It basically said read the entire novel out loud.  Print it out and mark make corrections with pen.  See the whole thing laid out. The book also mentioned that just read the dialogue of your characters, then of each character. 

It made me wonder if my dialogue for Lucifer for example is consistent.  Does he sound the same throughout the book?

I’ve also had thought and am wondering to myself am I really writing about Apollyon as opposed to Lucifer?  Lucifer seems to have taken a backstage.  He doesn’t seem to be the one moving the story along.  I don’t know yet if this is a good or bad thing.

 I have been reading D. Swains book; and trying to properly grasp the concept of MRU’s.  What he calls motivation reaction units.  I hope to keep reading and writing in hopes to perfect the technique.  It’s one thing to have a picture in your head a vision that you want to share.  It’s another to have the words or a command of the language necessary to explicate it to paper.

 His book is deep.  He has a command of the English language that I can only hope to achieve.

In answering the question of how do you write vividly?  His answer?  Use specific and concrete, and definite pictorial nouns to describe action.  Instead of saying creature say rhinoceros.  Use the girl over using the word female.  Etc.

That was it.  As  look back I found that writing about WHAT  I was writing, helped me to become a better writer.  I have a long way to go still.  But if there’s one thing I appreciate about writing it is that it is a craft that can be improved upon.  What about you?

Do you journal?

Donovan

Donovan M. Neal is the Amazon best-selling independently published author of the Third Heaven Series: a speculative Christian fantasy four book series that explores the captivating story about the fall of Lucifer. The book takes readers on an epic journey through the celestial realms, offering a unique perspective on the events surrounding Lucifer’s rebellion and his descent into darkness. In this imaginative tale, Donovan weaves together elements of Christian theology, angelic mythology, and fantastical world-building. The story delves into the cosmic conflict between good and evil, painting a vivid picture of the spiritual warfare that unfolded in the heavens. Donovan has published eleven books and is currently working on publishing five more in the year 2023 alone. His books have reached thirteen countries including India, Japan, the Philippines, Mexico, Brazil and across Europe, Canada and the US. He has sold over thirty thousand units of his books and generated over a quarter million in gross sales part time and without an agent. Donovan has produced fiction; non-fiction and most recently published a graphic novel. His genre of preference is fantasy and he has been named among such notable authors as Frank Perretti, Brian Godawa, and the late Dr. Michael S. Heiser. When he’s not writing or working, Donovan can be found gaming or enjoying various forms of media. He holds an undergraduate degree from the University of Michigan (Ann Arbor) and a graduate degree in Non-profit Management from Walden University. Prior to his current career, Donovan served in ordained ministry from 1993-2011 and has extensive experience teaching the Bible. You can learn more about him professionally if you would like by clicking here. His favorite movie is the Lord of the Rings Trilogy. He also enjoys gaming and can be found on the Playstation5 deep in Destiny 2, He’s owned most gaming systems all the way back from Atari and Pong! and has made several friends from his beloved days on World of Warcraft. A lover of such classics as chess and backgammon he loves most games and the strategy behind them. When he is not imagining comic conflicts between good and evil he is helping to secure employment for housing insecure women as the Executive Director of a non-profit in the city of Detroit and also serves in the prayer and discipleship ministry of his local church.

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